Saturday, August 4, 2007

shopping spree





ZOEI: (EARLY MORNING 7 AM ) RING! RING! RING! (THE ALARM CLOCK) AH AH OH YOU CANT BE SERIOUS IT'S ALREADY 7.00.AM
OK. AT LEAST IT'S A SATURDAY. FLUR AND I WILL HAVE TIME TO HANG OUT.

FLUR: (EARLY MORNING 7 AM) RINNG! RINNG! RINNG! OH DAMN! AH AH... WHAT? ALREADY 7.00AM.?.
I HATE YOU ALARM CLOCK! I WAS HAVING THE BEST DREAM EVER !YOU WOKE ME UP .
WELL, IT'S SATURDAY. YEA ,ZOEI AND I WILL DO THE MOST STUPID THINGS ON EARTH !!
(9.AM)


ZOEI: DING! LING! DING! LING! (ON MOBILE) HELLO! OH HI FLUR, WHAT'S UP? WAIT A MINUTE, YOUR BOARD. I KNEW IT.

FLUR: I'M REALLY BOARD. I REALLY NEED TO DO SOMETHING! I FEEL SO "HORRID!" ZOEI, YOU GOTTA DO SOMETHING PLEASE?

ZOEI: YEA, WHAT SHALL WE DO? WE CAN GO-----HMM HMM-

FLUR: SHOPPING !!!!

ZOEI : OK. I HAVEN'T FINISHED MY SENTENCE FLUR. ANYWAY, I'LL PICK YOU UP IN 15 MINUTES.
( 15 MINUTES LATER )

ZOEI : PEEEEEEEEEEP PEEEEEEEEEEEEP FLURR PEEP PEEP.

FLUR: GIVE ME 2 SECONDS

ZOEI: OH YEA . THE FRENCH WAY OF WASTING TIME.

FLUR: I HEARD THAT !!! OK I'M READY ( HOUSE DOOR SLAMS )

ZOEI: HOP-ON, LET'S GO .

FLUR : (ON MOBILE ) HI OLIVIA WHAT'S UP? YOUR BORD. TOO BAD. YOUR NOT HAVING FUN LIKE ME .

OLIVIA: (ON MOBILE ) YEA, RIGHT I'M AT SEVENTEEN STYLE, BRAINIAK . SO WHERE ARE YOU? are u coming?

FLUR: yup I'M ON MY WAY ,CALM DOWN AND DON'T EVER THINK I'M EXCITED TO SEE YOU!!!!(end of conversation)

ZOEI: gosh!! she thinks your excited to see her!!

FLUR: PS: i am a bit

ZOEI: AHHH Whatever !! oh we are here!

FLUR: wow look at those shoes. i love that short, wow that top is soo cool!!

ZOEI: OOPS , don't think about it!! Your buying out of your money, not from mine. No matter how much u beg !!

FLUR : OH Please . I've only got about 6.000 in my bank account and i can't bother to withdraw it now!!

ZOEI : U MEAN 60.000!! i can withdraw the money for u. It's only a half minute drive from here!

FLUR: oh, no need. Your waisting your time. Please, can I buy 1 item , only one please.

ZOEI : only one ,nothing more

FLUR : U ARE MY best friend ever, I'm buying that top!!(rushes in excitement)
( 2 minuets later ) (Zoei&Flur ON MOBILE)

FLUR : oh hi Zoei ,umm i saw this cool dress it only costs 17.999 ,can i buy it? please please please!!!!!

ZOEI : did u forget what i said? one item.

FLUR : oh i only bought that top that costs about 3.000& the dress about 17.999 that's only 2 please!!

ZOEI: OK only 2

FLUR: thanks were are you anyway

ZOEI : some were you don't need to know!! (parks the vehicle at the side of the road)

FLUR: OK whatever!

ZOEI : OK the bank is there ,now Flur said "ring ring ring" (oh damn!! the phone)

FLUR: Zoei i saw this cool pair of shoes that costs about 13.000 and this beautiful shampoo can i buy it!!!

ZOEI: yea go right ahead!!

FLUR : whaaaaaaaaaaaa you just said OK!! oh Zoei i love u(end of conversation)

ZOEI : OK now the top is 3.000 the dress is 17.999 and the pair of shoes are 13.000 and adds up with the shampoo all together it costs 33.999
OK that's easy to withdraw, all i need is Fleur's credit card number and I'm done
(ON MOBILE)

FLUR: hello oh hi Zoei why u call

ZOEI: tell me your credit card no

FLUR: 9989 9844 549 why

ZOEI: just testing bye!!(end of conversation) OK now ill just type the number BINGO!!
OK i withdraw-ed 33.999 now I'm out of here.

FLUR: OK I'm done, all for free I'm soo lucky!! oh Zoei you came , were did you go?

ZOEI: i withdraw-ed the money from the bank i mean "your bank"

FLUR: whaaaaaaaaaaaa oh ummmm damn!! how did you get my card number

ZOEI : ahh flur you were sooo exited you didn't think whats coming ahead so you just gave me your card number.

ZOEI: ahhh oh i cant believe it I'm a mutt a total idiot!!

OLIVIA: ahh for once you talk the truth about your self!!

The end !! written by :Mariana Perera (by me)

5 comments:

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